PITCH

Dayne Gramoll
2 min readNov 29, 2017

Slide Update-

My slides were majorly updated. My first slide is dirastically different. I deleted a lot of unnecessary words and changed the color layout of it. The old version had a white background, but I changed it to a soft orange to add some pop and to blend in with the orange wall of the messy pantry. I got rid of the current state of art and market section from the old slide. I replaced those with just a textbox that says families in the corner. I then simplified my current issues section and problem section from the old slide, to two short sentences. Lastly I greatly enlarged the photos.

The second slide did not have as many changes but still had some. The biggest change I made to this slide was adding color and enlarging the image of my final product. I also enlarged the text that says final product. I deleted the unnecessary images that were in the corners of the old slide. I changed the font that was at the bottom and top to a more professional one. Lastly I simplified the text on the bottom of the slide to two short sentences.

Storyboard-

To come up with a good speech I opened a document and added a bunch of textboxes and images of points I wanted to hit. Then I thought about how I wanted to start my pitch and decided to start by introducing my product and how theres nothing like it on the market. Then I wanted to go into who this is going to be targeting and what problems exist in that market. Next I wanted to display my features and discribe how my product will fix the problems. Then I wanted to display one feature and how it would work. Lastly I thought I should close my pitch on how much money people would pay for this product.

Video-

My pitch video for my final product!

Timeline :
Slide Update by 12/2
Storyboard by 12/3
Video by 12/4–5
Upload finished blog by 12/6

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